Hi my name is Teana and I am a year 6 and I go to NPS
Wednesday, 31 July 2019
Week 2 chapter chat.
This is my week two chapter chat I did the letter what Stanley writ to has mum at Camp Green Lake. He lied in his letter and he said that he is doing swimming lessons and he said he is going to become a world champion water skier. we had to tell the truth in the letter like how he would have really said it. It was really fun I like the emoji because he has the blisters.
Pleased to see you using some capital letters for proper nouns (Camp Green Lake) - keep that up. Chapter Chat also needs capital letters so that would be good to remember for next time and anyone's names also. It should say Stanley "wrote" not "writ." I think you have done a great job of getting across what has been going on.
Pleased to see you using some capital letters for proper nouns (Camp Green Lake) - keep that up. Chapter Chat also needs capital letters so that would be good to remember for next time and anyone's names also. It should say Stanley "wrote" not "writ."
ReplyDeleteI think you have done a great job of getting across what has been going on.
I like how you add so much detalie in your dicripshon! This is amazing!😁👍
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